[mkell755]

Hi Kbridges! Very nice! I like the tone of your voice and you have a nice warm, calm approach that is good for this genre. You might try preforming the first 3 sentences of the script with a little more energy – that’s the part where you are REALLY excited about teaching someone how to paraglide! Just more enthusiasm in general. After the first part of the script, it then settles down a little into the teaching part, and your tone there seemed appropriate. Good job!

Mary