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January 18, 2021 at 8:03 pm
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Hi John, thanks for the feedback! I’m glad it came across as conversational and authentic. The first 2 sentences sounded like something I would actually say to a friend. If I did this again I may add some periods in the third sentence. It goes on and on but would be clearer in meaning and easier to perform if broken up a bit. I hear from my coach all the time how we should be picturing / targeting a very specific person for the scripts. Sometimes that is easy to do, and sometimes not. Thanks again!
Mary