[rogue1]

Hello everyone! Had posted this earlier, received some very constructive feedback (Thanks, BrianWiggins!), and thought I’d post again back-to-back to gauge any improvement.

Trying for a fast–yet still clear–delivery. All comments are welcome and appreciated. Thanks for listening!

TEENAGE MUTANT NINJA TURTLES ELECTRONIC MASKS

“Slice and Dice! With the new Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles electronic masks, you’ll always be ready to “turtle up”! Take that, Shredder! Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles each sold separately by Playmates.”

Attachments:

You must be logged in to view attached files.