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kfvoicekfvoice
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Hi Mary! Good read.

It was clear, but I felt the pacing could of been a little faster in spots, or maybe don’t pause too long after commas.

Maybe it is me, but this didn’t sound like a pistol commercial. Perhaps it’s the script I am having an issue with, because this sounded more suited for an RV read.

I hope this helps!