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Hi Mary!

Maybe a little more emphasis on “Cold Snap” in the opening line, and “This Sam Adams seasonal…” in the next line? I could hear your pitch and tone change some with the list of seasonal spices, but it could vary a little more. The list read did flow well, to me, so good job there.

Good job, overall. Keep it up!

P.S. Since you like beer, try a read for Rolling Rock? The bottle phrasing might be an interesting read. 🙂