[katelyndawnvo]

Hi Toque! Nice audio quality and you have a very nice voice. A few notes on the read would be the first line had an uptick in your pitch so it made it sound like a question – “You sent a message to Washington?” I’ve done it too haha! And then I think it is carefully paced so if you note how you are in conversation, when we are in a conversation we don’t pace ourselves so carefully right. I think if you paced this out a bit quicker it may also help that passion and frustration you are supposed to convey come through. Great work though, keep it up! Very exciting that you are working towards a demo.