[Amitofu]

Overall you’ve got a good voice. I’d say acting wise, maybe it sounded like you were too focused on something technical (eg; accent or script) that it lacked presence. I didn’t feel like I was being asked any of the question with a real sense of wonderment. Psychologically, rather your question is rhetorical or a direct question to the listener, the read needs to evoke imagery or creativity. a certain vibe of ponderment – eg: “Would you find new dreams or create wonders?” ‘new dreams’ and ‘create wonders’ can either be read like synonyms or they can be read against/versus each other; but either way the selling point is that the sky is the limit (so to speak).

Your read was good, but not nessicarily great. Keep at it though.