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kfvoicekfvoice
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Hi Robert!

Hearing you read John Deere is approved by this Green Mountain girl! 🙂

I prefer the second script for it’s pacing. I think the tone and bill-boarding of “That’s how we run.” would make more sense if John Deere was included before it: John Deere. That’s how we run. It would then sound more like a tag line. Otherwise, I don’t think I would raise the volume on this last line. Just my thoughts.

Overall, good job!

Kathy