[mkell755]

Hi CYeschenko! I too have to practice many times to get a recording that feels good enough to post, glad to hear I’m not the only one!

I liked the read – good pace, clarity and flow of the script, and I think your voice is well-suited for this commercial. I noticed that “…holiday treats” sounded like it ended with an question mark instead of a period, as well as the last word “happy”, but those are very minor points. Overall very well done!

Mary