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kfvoicekfvoice
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Welcome back, Mary!

Your pace was good here. I can hear you relaxing more.

The opening line needs a little more of an enthusiastic tone, and in the lists (pursue passions, overcome limitations and realize potentialspace, expertise and inspiration), if you varied your inflections with them more, it would improve the read.

I hope this helps. Keep it up! Good read!

Kathy