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[kfvoice]

Welcome back, Mary!

Your pace was good here. I can hear you relaxing more.

The opening line needs a little more of an enthusiastic tone, and in the lists (pursue passions, overcome limitations and realize potential … space, expertise and inspiration), if you varied your inflections with them more, it would improve the read.

I hope this helps. Keep it up! Good read!

Kathy