[kfvoice]

Hi Tim!

Great read!

My feedback here is for your audio set up.

I felt like there was a louder hum here, than in your first reading I gave feedback on.

Your reading started out quiet and whisper like at the beginning, and then the volume of your read in the second sentence got louder. It started around “where love…”. I am not sure if this is part of your audio edit, or if your tone changed.

Have you sent in a audio sample for the engineers to listen to?

Overall, good job!

Kathy