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kfvoice
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Hi Mary!

Enunciation was clear. I felt like you could of read this a tad slower, though. It sounded like you would speed up after the commas, too, instead of letting the sentence breath a little (micro-pause). Also be mindful of placing those micro-pauses where not intended (between “future … or”)

Try varying your tone a little more with the line “You may recognize them.” I read that as sounding sarcastic.

I hope this is helpful.

Kathy