Edge Studio has been producing high-quality audio and educating students in the art of VO for over thirty years. We are committed to providing the highest standard of production and education to our clients and students around the world.
Hi RYoung! Great read – good pace, flow and enunciation and it sounds very well-produced. I think you could get into character a little more; some of the thoughts seemed to be presented as if you were telling a light-hearted story, not rescuing someone from death. So that could mean a little more variation in tone to get your point across (I’m working on that myself). The sentence that starts with “This was then my reward…” could sound a little more angry than the first part – you are stunned by how much it hurts to try to save someone only to be shot as a reward for your good act, like what would that really feel like? “…playfully fled.” sounded more like “…playfully fled?” Overall really good read. Keep it up!
Mary
Edge Studio has been producing high-quality audio and educating students in the art of VO for over thirty years. We are committed to providing the highest standard of production and education to our clients and students around the world.
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