[kfvoice]

Hi Mary!

After listening, I felt like you sounded more relaxed, natural, during this part of your script:

Color Street offers a vast array of colors and nail art design, direct to Independent Stylists and ultimately to clients. These stunning nail polish strips keep their good looks up to 10 days, and they’re easy to remove with any nail polish remover.

In this section, your pitch also emphasized important words. There was a little slight pause between “stylists and”, but otherwise this section had a great delivery.

I hope this helps. Keep it up!

Kathy