Reply To: Feedback Forum

Homepage Forums Community Feedback Forum Reply To: Feedback Forum

#58026
Avatarkfvoice
Participant

Hi Carla! Great pace and overall tone. I would suggest emphasizing “HONEY BUNCHES OF OATS” a little more. It does jump out on the script (as the product), so perhaps vary your pitch and tone, and make your audience know why you are excited! I hope this helps. Nice read!