Edge Studio has been producing high-quality audio and educating students in the art of VO for over thirty years. We are committed to providing the highest standard of production and education to our clients and students around the world.
First: “Take a trip”…the “a” should be a short “a”, like “ah”, not a long “a” like the Canadian “eh”.
Second…it comes across overall as rather flat. There isn’t much in the way of change in inflection, and I’m not getting any emotion behind this. Try to find the important words and ways to emphasize them by changing the inflection. Try to find who this read is for, and talk to them.
Also, the second part of the first sentence really feels mashed together, like you’re rushing through it. Slow it down, let it breathe.
Edge Studio has been producing high-quality audio and educating students in the art of VO for over thirty years. We are committed to providing the highest standard of production and education to our clients and students around the world.
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