[MGoh]

Hi there, I enjoy your voice. The thing I’m not hearing is the thing I’m working on myself — connection. I like your pacing and appreciate how you’re landing on some words or injecting some attitude into others. But it doesn’t still doesn’t feel like you’re talking to me in person. The ancestry clip, for example, I don’t feel like you’re actually asking me the questions so much as reading them. How would you ask me these questions if I were standing right in front of you — and you really wanted to know if it was my mom in those pictures? How can you translate that kind of engaged energy to the copy?