[Grace17]

Hi Amanda,
I think the Narration script is a good one for a Demo. You don’t sound choppy to me. You also have a great voice that I can easily imagine in commercials and documentaries.
I think the pace should be a little faster, just to come off as conversational. It kind of comes off like you’re reading or like you’re projecting what you think the narration should sound like. That can remove the personality from the read and I’ve been told, you’re personality is really what sets you apart from other voice actors with similar skill and voice. I think visualizing a scene (specifying who you’re talking to, where you are, how you feel, etc.) could make the read more conversational and lively.

For the documentary, funny enough I think you should be slower just because there are a lot of visuals in documentaries and you want to give the audience room to process what you say. You may want to exercise visualizing the images that will accompany your voiceover, so it’ll be like you’re responding to the visuals in front of you rather than speaking in a way that you think you should at any given time.

I love your energy towards the end of the read. Though sometimes you portrayed the same emotion for words that have very different connotations. You want the listener to hear the difference between these very emotive words; “Introspective, aloof, unpredictable, affectionate, comical and mischievous.” The difference between these words should be reflected in how you say each word so it sounds more genuine, and less like reading.

I’d also recommend listening to commercials and documentaries, just to understand their pacing and how the final product may look like.

I hope that helps!