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Hi Mitch, thanks for your feedback! I’m glad you liked Sam Adams – I’m a true fan of all their beers. 🙂 I did record that one a few weeks ago and decided this time to just not take it so seriously. The chuckle was just part of having fun with it, and is something I could see myself speculating about it with a friend, Thanks for your comments! I’m working to sound more natural, so I’m happy to hear that. Thanks again!
Mary
Hi Don, thanks for the feedback! On the Sam Adams read, I read it previously a month or so ago and struggled a bit. It was a little easier this time for some reason, I just decided to totally relax and have fun with it, and it sounded better as a result.
Yes, the “fine-tuned” was not right, in a previous version I left out the “to” after fine-tuned and over compensated on fine-tuned as a result. I will work on that as well as the “yer”s, of which there are many in this script – my accent is coming through for sure on that! Thank you,
Mary
Hi Docr15, really good! This is a great genre for you. You sounded warm, approachable and informative, but still conversational. Good job!!
Mary
Hi Docr15, really good! I think you could really lean into and have fun with this one, and emphasize “GAME BOY ADVANCED!” like your hair is on fire, I mean really get excited!!!! I agree too that some of the listed items could be a little more varied in tone – you are trying to convince grade and middle school kids and are trying to get their attention – you have permission to cut loose! 🙂
Mary
Hi Docr15 – really nice! I like the warmth and directness in your voice, and the genre is a really good fit for you. Good luck on your demo! You’ll do great.
Mary
Hi Touzet, really nice! Your voice is really warm and perfect for this script, and your pacing made it really inviting, it was unrushed. Good job!
Mary
Hi Touzet, really nice read and production! I Like the smoothness and flow of it, sounds really relaxed and welcoming.
Mary
Hi Adrothfield, really good! Great energy and nice tone variation and excitement throughout. I like how you delivered “taste the awesomeness” – really drew me in! Good work.
Mary
Hi Adrothfield, good read! I heard a bit of choppiness as well, you might try just re-reading it over and over again until it’s memorized (this one is short enough for that) and then it will sound smoother once you record it. Also I noticed that some of your “to”s sound like “tuh”s like on “switch to up to”. I do that too and it can sound a little unnatural but better to slow down on those parts so you can hear the full word more clearly. I like your voice! Keep it up.
Mary
