[waninick]

Adam, nice voice for this kind of thing. I would just suggest that you put quite a lot more energy into it. Really make the listener invest themselves in the subject. Push the volume of the speaking to more conversational levels, and find the words that make you excited about the subject and really get behind them. As for pace: good. Conversational: ok. Sometimes a script isn’t written like we speak, and that makes it a bit more difficult. But the recording space sounds great, and the noise floor is good. One more thing, watch the leading ‘F’ sound. It kinda squeaks on you much like it does me…:).

Looking forward to hearing more of your work.

TimG