[Terra Ashe]

Nerds
-Nice pace, I would just slow down that first word, maybe give yourself a lead in to start.
AGI
-Lovely tone! I think you could have a bigger tone shift between the stated problem in the first line and then going into the solution.
Dovato
– you have a nice empathetic voice here, keep the empathy and add some more brightness to it, you are giving someone something that could really improve their quality of life. The end is a little choppy.
Loreol
– I think your tone and pace are good here I think it just needs to be a bit more conversational. Try to have a very specific person in mind who you are talking to and telling about this awesome new mascara you just started using.

Overall good job!