[Logan DFD]

I’m working on my natural delivery for my Demo coming up. Do these reads sound good? Do they sound like commercials?

Harvey Home Theatre

He has a 160 IQ, performs cardiac surgery for a living.
And now, he can even operate his home entertainment system.
Introducing Harvey Home Theater.
It’s so sophisticated, it’s simple.
Dimensions of sight and sound unheard of, until now.
All at your fingertips.
Now, if he could only operate the microwave.
Home Theater from Harvey, not your ordinary electronics store.
Call for the Harvey near you.

McCholesterol’s

Come to Mclesterole’s and try our Triple Bacon and cheese Heart Attack Burger and triple fat fries!
This Friday, for only fifty cents, at Mclesterole’s.

Eat like there’s no tomorrow…

Death by fast food, why not?
…
Oh, is this thing still on?
Oh yes, this Friday at Mclesterole’s…
Eat like there’s no tomorrow

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