[mikemcgann]

You have a great voice, but each sample was pretty fast. I think especially the cool jazz sample should be slowed down emphasis the “cool” in jazz.

Watch out in the “carnation be” I think you were a little hot on the mic or just need to lower your gain as it created distortion.

Also listen for mouth clicks, the NY Life had a few.

Again great voice, just mostly need to take your time.