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jessnh4
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Hi all!

I’m creating a profile on an audition website that asks for a sample recording using this script:

Introducing SerenityApp, the mobile game that helps you sleep better and makes it easier to meditate. This app uses patent-pending meditation technology that combines the habit-forming aspects of playing video games and scientific sleep research insights. Curious to know more? Just stay tuned for our latest updates.

I thought I’d get some feedback and suggestions before I upload it. Does it have the right energy and tone? Any issues with pronunciation, pacing, or anything else that you notice?

Thanks!

Edit: Accidentally uploaded twice and couldn’t remove one. But FYI they’re both the same!

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