[John Trape]

Hi everyone,

I have three commercial scripts and would very much welcome any and all feedback.

Regards,

John

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Dear Holly,

Thank you so much for your contact, and let me just say that the position of B&B Corporate Benefit Sales Representative sounds like an amazing opportunity. I have worked with many people over the course of my career, and I’d love to be able to add Regional Manager, Benefits Broker and Associate to that list. I just have a few questions before you begin paying me:
1. Do I need to care whether or not people live or die? I ask this only because, in the tumultuous night time thrashing of my spirit before slumber takes its deathlike hold of me, I have looked deeply within my soul and found it lacking in empathy for my fellow man.
On the one hand, it seems like this attitude might be disadvantageous to someone who sells life assurance, but then again, it may not be! Even with my seventy-nine years on this Earth, I don’t know! The great philosophy man Plato once said that the only true virtue is to not know anything, and I know at least twice as less as that, so take that right on down to banking town, Plato!

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