[SuperLuke]

Good recording quality. Good performances. What was the homework, write a commercial? Create characters?

1) Laser cannon arena was cool to hear. Although, I thought your character was in the same mood throughout the performance. I can see this as a commercial. But one thing I learned was that the more high notes you have in your commercial/ character performances, the more low notes you may need. Try performing it faster and maintaining high and low notes: like something you might see on a commercial advertisement: example “Rated E for Everyone”, “Join your favorite characters on this epic adventure…”

2) The Stout was an engaging read and you sound like you’re being conversational and inviting to buy the product. Very nice!

3) Aura App was nice, you sound like you’re advertising the best solution for relaxation and going to sleep/ having inner peace. Good job!

Hope this comment and critique was helpful!