[JustJohn]

I think the best part of your read is “Elegant, stylish, exceptionally comfortable.” It’s the most committed-sounding part of the read. At the very beginning, the “C” on the first word explodes a bit excessively. It’s clear that you’ve chosen words to emphasize. When you’re not emphasizing words, however, I think the tone sometimes falls a little flat. It sounds like you placed a comma between “waterways” and “into,” which makes it sound like you’re emphasizing the word “into.” I wonder what it would sound like if you didn’t have that little pause there. Great voice!