Reply To: Feedback Forum

Homepage Forums Community Feedback Forum Reply To: Feedback Forum

#65387
Avatartimmurphy306
Participant

I really loved your phrasing on this read. The way you emphasize the right words really gives a nice flow to the whole piece, very conversational and natural. I would slow your pacing, though, it sounded a little rushed. I also noticed some echo, too. Maybe a few more blankets in the room?