[Tina]

Truebill- I think it would be helpful to think of a lead in line. What happened right before? Who are you talking to and why are you telling them this information? A recommendation would be to practice this one as if you are having a conversation with someone and every line is an answer to a question they are asking you. I did this on some reads and it helps it come out more natural sounding.

Pretty Litter- This one sounds like a reading. I think just taking the moment before and establishing who you are telling this to will make the world of difference.

Wix- This read was the most natural and free flowing. Really nice pacing and you sounded confident in the material.

Just a few tweaks to your reads and you’ll get there! Hope this helps!