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Hi Cynthia! Welcome! Good job on these. I liked all 3 of them, and the nice textured rasp in your voice!
Script 1: Good energy and attitude. You might try a slight micro-pause after “kids were!” to help get the point across that 4H is all about the kids leading themselves for just a little bit more emphasis. Small thing!
Script 2: Good read. Good variation of the list of items starting from at about 23 seconds at “company polices,…” to the end of the script.
Script 3: Sounded quite a bit quieter than the other two. Also it seemed like the first phrase was a little disconnected from the rest of the sentence – “no matter where we live,” sounded like “no matter where we live.” (with a period, not a comma) , I think for the phrase to make sense it should flow just a little better if that makes sense. Good job!

Mary

Mary