[mkell755]

Hi Adebenedicts! Both recordings were really quiet on my end, I had to turn it to the max (100) and it was still very quiet and hard to hear completely. For the first script, it sounded pretty monotone to me, I realize it is a narration, but it did not have a lot of variation in tone. The second sounded much better to me – you sounded more authentic and invested in the script as told to others. Pacing was good for both scripts. Keep it up!

Mary