[kfvoice]

Very nice, John! Welcome!

You have a great voice for biography/documentary; warm and welcoming. Your pacing, I thought, was good. Be mindful of pausing in your read where it’s not build into the script. The one thing that really stood out to me was the pronunciation of “Monet”. I have included a link for reference.

https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/Monet

I hope this helps!

Kathy