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Hi Toque! Good read. Your voice is very warm and smooth. This script feels like a call to action to me. As such, I think the first 4 lines should be strong and decisive, and with a little more intensity. The second part, starting with “unfortunately” is giving the audience a proposed solution to the case as stated in the first 4 lines. Overall good read!

Mary