Hi Evette – welcome! I really like your voice – it is very soft and sweet and well suited for these types of commercials.
Script 1: This one felt just a tad rushed to me. You might try envisioning yourself in France and experiencing being there, and possibly adding some varied inflections to the last sentence, which includes a list of items.
Script 2: Good read!
Script 3: Another good read. You might try emphasizing “Oil of Olay” in the last sentence more, the tone drops and it’s the only time the product name is mentioned. Keep it up!
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